Featured project: Email campaigns + automated flows for Odele Beauty
I’ve written copy for most of Odele Beauty’s email campaigns since 2021. As a result of my efforts, open rates climbed by 30% in 2022 (yay for irresistible subject lines 👏 ) and click-through rates have stayed consistently above industry benchmarks.
I’m currently revising their automated welcome flow for new subscribers—see a snapshot of the rewrite-in-progress below.
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Subject line/preview: 👋 Let’s get to know each other! / Thanks for signing up.
[hed] Welcome.
We’re so excited to have been invited into your inbox. Now that you’ve signed up, you’ll be the first to know about new product launches, sales, events + fresh reads. Until then:
>> Learn about our high standards.
>> Shop by hair type.
>> Say hi on Instagram.
>> Take 20% off your first purchase using the code below.
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Subject line/preview: 👋 Welcome to Odele / Thanks for signing up!
[banner] Take 20% off your first order with code XXXX
[BLOCK 1]
[hed] We’re so glad you’re here.
At Odele, we make elevated beauty essentials for everyday life. We believe clean ingredients should be the norm (not the exception) and that everyone deserves access to feel-good formulas that work.
Our emails are just like our products: free of junk, full of good stuff and designed to make life easier. So stay tuned for science-based hair tips, surprise sales and more.
[CTA] Shop Now
[BLOCK 2]
[hed] Something for every body
Fine strands, thick coils, dry skin, sensitive scalps and everything in between.
[hed] Responsibly sourced
Only the best and safest ingredients make the cut.
[hed] Feel good + do good too
Self-care is great, but community care is everything. Through our Odele Gives program, we donate 5% of our pretax profits to communities in need.
[BLOCK 3]
[hed] The hair necessities
Start with the best of the best—cult-favorite formulas for all hair types + textures.
[CTA] Shop Bestsellers
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Subject line/preview: No new friends / (except these)
[hed] Meet your new styling pals!
Name: Leave-In Conditioner
Hobbies: delivering mega-moisture, defining curls + controlling frizz like a pro
BFFs: wavy to curly, medium to coarse + thirsty hair
[CTA] Shop
Name: Leave-In Detangling Tonic
Hobbies: melting away tangles, daily heat + pollutant protection
BFFs: gets along great with all hair types
[CTA] Shop
Name: Texturizing Sea Salt Spray
Hobbies: creating effortless beachy waves from your bathroom, reviving limp locks, looking stunning on your shelf
BFFs: straight, wavy, curly + fine to medium hair
[CTA] Shop
Name: Air Dry Styler
Hobbies: smoothing frizz, adding silky shine, creating soft, natural separation + saving you lots of styling time
BFFs: straight, wavy, curly + fine to medium hair
[CTA] Shop
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Subject line/preview: Get the air dry of your dreams / Here’s how
[BLOCK 1]
[hed] We’re air dry experts
Not to brag, but we’ve perfected the art of air drying. Say goodbye to fussy, frizzy wash and gos—and hello to our award-winning Air Dry Styler.
[CTA] I’m Team Air Dry
[press quote]
★★★★★
“There’s no shortage of air-dry products on the market, but in our humble opinion, none work as well as the Air Dry Styler. Just a tiny dollop tames frizz, adds shine and smoothness, and generally leaves your hair looking better, even if you don’t do another thing to it.”
-Byrdie
[CTA] Shop Air Dry Styler
[BLOCK 2]
[hed] Take your pick
Browse heatless stylers for every hair type.
Air Dry Styler
Best for: straight, wavy + curly hair
[CTA] Shop Now
Leave-in Detangling Tonic
Best for: all hair types, especially tangle-prone textures
[CTA] Shop Now
Leave-in Conditioner
Best for: all hair types, especially thirsty strands
[CTA] Shop Now
Flex Hair Gel
Best for: all hair types, especially hair that needs more hold
[CTA] Shop Now